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Specimens of SCP-XXXX are extremely decayed, with large sloughs of dead skin hanging from their bodies, exposing muscles and various internal structures.

The comma before "with" could be removed here.

Across SCP-XXXX body are patches of varying color and size,

I'm having a hard time visualizing what you mean by "patches" here. you could collapse this section into the previous sentence if i'm understanding this correctly:

"Specimens of SCP-XXXX are extremely decayed, with large sloughs of dead skin of varying size and color hanging from their bodies…"

It is theorized that this transference of biological matter is how SCP-XXXX sustains itself, although this theory is fairly unsubstantiated.

I would take this out of it's describing itself as an unsubstantiated theory.


I'm kinda on the fence with this one, I like some of the imagery and enjoyed the description of these things, but at the same time it felt a little too basic? I enjoyed it but it felt like it needed more — just something to finish this off. The EoD reference didn't really add anything to article — you could definitely expand on that to add more to this. Just an addendum/some addenda or something to give it a little more of an ending.